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Alone I sit, alone I stand,
Upon a beach of yellow sand.
I see you here beside me
You hold me close and I live free.
Then I blink and you're gone
Leaving me to carry on.
The love I lost  should I have found?
Sweet sea take and help me drowned.
©2005-2010 ~stargazersteph
:iconstargazersteph:

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I really haven't been having the greatest year, if you have read my other works. I went to a beach in Maine over the summer and it inspired me a bit.

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:iconfirebird1423:
thats deep... deeply depressing... are you okay?
:iconstargazersteph:
Meh. What is ok? I'm well enough to live. This was written a while ago so.... :shrug:
Thanks for your concern.

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"Within the darkest of souls lay the brightest of hearts.
All they need is a ray of sunshine to help set them free."
-Anonymous :frail:
(If you have some time, read my poetry)
:iconfirebird1423:
well enough to live i guess is okay... i think...
:iconstargazersteph:
Hey, don't worry about me.
Take care of yourself and be happy.

(sorry for rhyming that. Pretty bad, I know)

--
"Within the darkest of souls lay the brightest of hearts.
All they need is a ray of sunshine to help set them free."
-Anonymous :frail:
(If you have some time, read my poetry)
:iconfirebird1423:
what rhyming thing? im so jelous that you can rhyme in your poems! for me it just doesnt work... and why cant you be happy as well?
:iconstargazersteph:
Well, happy and me rhyme. I don't know. I have this thing I guess. I come up with all sorts of couples and things. But poems don't have to rhyme and I'm sure you know. I have several that don't.

Happy? Happiness and I don't talk much anymore. I think I either did something wrong, or it just hates me. I have moments of amusement, but true happiness? :shrug:
I'll work on it.

--
"Within the darkest of souls lay the brightest of hearts.
All they need is a ray of sunshine to help set them free."
-Anonymous :frail:
(If you have some time, read my poetry)
:iconfirebird1423:
person dont think of it as a task look for the little things in the day for example a good hair day, no food is stuck in your braces (if you have them), a complement from some one, you complementing someone else and then them turning around and giving you one, your crush-just seeing that person, and A on a test/report card... you can just jump to the ultimate thing baby steps first!! i think the saying goes, "Rome WAS NOT built in day!"
:iconstargazersteph:
I try to do that. Not too many little things bother me now.
Thanks for the advice.

--
"Within the darkest of souls lay the brightest of hearts.
All they need is a ray of sunshine to help set them free."
-Anonymous :frail:
(If you have some time, read my poetry)

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